2.06.2011

what's in it for me

my goal is to write
words bringing you back to read
again and again.

dear reader, will you
come and share my words and world?
i crave your liking.

(This poem was written for Jingle Poetry's Poetry Potluck, week 21: Aims, Goals, and Ambitions.)
Posted by Marian at 5:17 PM
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31 comments:

  1. ianFebruary 6, 2011 at 5:36 PM

    mission accomplished

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  2. MarianFebruary 6, 2011 at 5:38 PM

    ah! thank you. all truthy up in here.
    i need external validation. and lots and lots of love.
    xoxo

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  3. UnknownFebruary 6, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    already here girl :)

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  4. MarianFebruary 6, 2011 at 7:19 PM

    yippee! roll call!

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2011 at 8:30 PM

    present and accounted for!

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  6. UnknownFebruary 6, 2011 at 9:13 PM

    Oh man. You DID have a little something.
    its a happy ditty!
    "i crave your liking."
    love that

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  7. Linda Bob Grifins Brin KorbetisFebruary 6, 2011 at 9:32 PM

    love this one.
    A++

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  8. TeresaFebruary 6, 2011 at 9:39 PM

    How sweet! I think this applies to all of us who write poetry!

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    goal accomplished! :)

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    You got it---I like the simplicity of this.

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  11. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2011 at 10:13 PM

    I think we have the same goals. Love your typewriter picture.

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  12. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2011 at 10:13 PM

    I love the statement and then the invitation. yes yes I will come back..

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  13. MarianFebruary 6, 2011 at 10:20 PM

    hmmmmm. a chord struck, it appears.
    we all want the love!

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  14. CarlFebruary 7, 2011 at 12:13 AM

    You are exceeding your goals by massive measures.

    Maybe next time you need a "stretch goal," a challenging deal? :-)

    Thank you for sharing your world with this fan.

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  15. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 12:27 AM

    always will haha! thank you for sharing.. here's my potluck..
    http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/12/broken-home/

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  16. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 4:11 AM

    i send you my liking to crave upon

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  17. BubbaFebruary 7, 2011 at 7:02 AM

    Wow, ask and you shall receive, eh?

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  18. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    yes I will come back again and again. Happy Potluck!
    Here's mine:
    http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/02/07/all-i-can/

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  19. MarianFebruary 7, 2011 at 9:45 AM

    i am having a sally field moment over here.
    !!!

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  20. Ramesh SoodFebruary 7, 2011 at 10:38 AM

    Why not? Do visit to see my 200th.. I think we all love writing..and spread the word of happiness..

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  21. BubbaFebruary 7, 2011 at 11:13 AM

    If you write it, they will come.

    (Spike the ball! Spike the ball!)

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  22. MarianFebruary 7, 2011 at 11:46 AM

    apparently!

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  23. UnknownFebruary 7, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    Well, dear Marian, you have achieved your goal. Well done!

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  24. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 12:23 PM

    Looks like you found the right formula!

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  25. MarianFebruary 7, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    seriously, i am nothing if not self-indulgent.

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  26. BubbaFebruary 7, 2011 at 2:28 PM

    Can't say I blame you: I'd certainly indulge. ;)

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  27. rmpWritingsFebruary 7, 2011 at 10:23 PM

    simple and to the point. well crafted and put. and an excellent goal i might add.

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  28. Molly @ Postcards from a Peaceful DivorceFebruary 7, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    Very clever. I love this!

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  29. MarianFebruary 7, 2011 at 10:42 PM

    truthy truth!

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  30. JamieDedesFebruary 8, 2011 at 9:01 PM

    Success! Well done, my dear. Happy Potluck days ... Poem on.

    Mine is here:
    http://musingbymoonlight.com/2011/02/06/love-grown-wild-2/

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  31. MarianFebruary 9, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    poem on? well, okay!

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