2.14.2011

valentine

let me
sit on your lap
breathe you like a new day
love begat the heat inside me
your prize.

33 comments:

  1. " topical! happening! so today. so right now."?

    I was hoping to see your NFL mock draft...

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  2. sorry to disappoint, just another fucking poem.

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  3. "just another fucking poem"?

    Have you been taking dork lessons with our friend?

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  4. don martin: just another poem about fucking. okay?

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  5. AH! Now, that's TWO different things...

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  6. isn't a poem "about fucking" a "fucking poem?"

    and while on the use of the word; it may be cliche, but fuck valentine's day.

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  7. Finally. I found someone doing something right on Valentine's Day. This is marvelously good.

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  8. "let me / sit on your lap" Very sexy simplicity.

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  9. breathe you like a new day...made me hold my breath...hot..

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  10. Oh my, spilled my tea! Very tight, extremely sensual.

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  11. holding breath, spilling tea. i dig this power!

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  12. nice...begat is not one you hear every day...i like the heat on this one...

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  13. crisply intimate...if there's such a thing.

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  14. Let me breathe you like a new day.... How awesome is that line?

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  15. You won't find it inside a fancy card, but I've breathed it on his face. This is 'wow'! It's HOT!

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  16. I LOVE FUCKING POEMS.... LOL

    This is SO FUCKING BRILLIANT....

    Sweet piece

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  17. the comments on this poem are far more entertaining than the poem itself!
    sheesh. and thanks :)

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  18. I'm enjoying both the poem and the comments! There can never be too many fucking poems!

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  19. i agree! but still, the smartalecs are everywhere :)

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  20. Enjoyed the poem and the comments..he..he..

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  21. The comments are entertaining, Marian, but the poem is wonderful.
    K

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  22. ha ha. getting around a bit late. These are the kind of poems my husband enjoys.. :)

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  23. hah! i hope you enjoy as well :)

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