2.10.2011

alone in my wormhole

how to
piss a girl off
you surely know but when
you faltered, laser beam into
my heart.

15 comments:

  1. To make it break
    it's gonna take
    a metal ball
    hung from a crane

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  2. good thing we don't have one of those :)

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  3. on the other hand, you gotta crane to pick the broken ruins up again?

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  4. I keep reading this one.
    its got me pondering...

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  5. a little cinquain, heavily influenced by They Might Be Giants.

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  6. I do love something condensed, reduced down to the bones.

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  7. aw. you are wicked nice. nicey nice, in fact.
    cdg? a soup analogy?

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  8. This one seems tongue in cheek to me. Well done!

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  9. funny,

    you brave man...have fun!
    A+

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  10. Very interesting.. I enjoyed reading it...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html

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  11. direct and to the point, right? heh.

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