2.10.2011

alone in my wormhole

how to
piss a girl off
you surely know but when
you faltered, laser beam into
my heart.
Posted by Marian at 10:33 PM
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15 comments:

  1. BubbaFebruary 11, 2011 at 7:48 AM

    To make it break
    it's gonna take
    a metal ball
    hung from a crane

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  2. MarianFebruary 11, 2011 at 8:57 AM

    good thing we don't have one of those :)

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  3. MarianFebruary 11, 2011 at 2:51 PM

    on the other hand, you gotta crane to pick the broken ruins up again?

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  4. NicoleFebruary 11, 2011 at 8:15 PM

    I keep reading this one.
    its got me pondering...

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  5. KateFebruary 11, 2011 at 10:06 PM

    Love this!!

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  6. MarianFebruary 12, 2011 at 10:05 AM

    a little cinquain, heavily influenced by They Might Be Giants.

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2011 at 5:25 PM

    I do love something condensed, reduced down to the bones.

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  8. UnknownFebruary 12, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    wicked good ;)

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  9. MarianFebruary 13, 2011 at 12:32 AM

    aw. you are wicked nice. nicey nice, in fact.
    cdg? a soup analogy?

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  10. Thoughts Not LostFebruary 13, 2011 at 9:21 PM

    This one seems tongue in cheek to me. Well done!

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  11. Linda Bob Grifins Brin KorbetisFebruary 13, 2011 at 10:49 PM

    funny,

    you brave man...have fun!
    A+

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  12. Other MaryFebruary 13, 2011 at 11:29 PM

    This made me smile. Kudos.

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  13. Shashidhar SharmaFebruary 14, 2011 at 7:37 AM

    Very interesting.. I enjoyed reading it...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html

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  14. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2011 at 10:13 AM

    laser beam. exactly

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  15. MarianFebruary 14, 2011 at 10:27 AM

    direct and to the point, right? heh.

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