1.24.2011

stasis

why are you remote
when i've turned you into the
other side of me?

10 comments:

  1. These simple lines carry such forlorn emptiness, bordering on despair. Powerful stuff!

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  2. even sunshine girls get the blues.

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  3. Get your spatula
    and then you'll get to see the
    other side of me.

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  4. spatula? after
    all these years, get over here
    i'd like to spank you.

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  5. Small poem.
    Big statement.
    Precisely.

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  6. i am mostly of the opinion that less is more.

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