1.11.2011

hay(na)ku for restless

edgy
no good
who's in charge?

6 comments:

  1. cool! hay(na)ku! I recently wrote a quartet of them upon discovering this lovely form. Yours is nice

    Luke @ WordSalad

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  2. hey, luke, i discovered the hay(na)ku at wordsalad, and said so somewhere around here. i have better examples. (she said, giggling)

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  3. Tee-Hee. If we think we're in charge, it's a grand illusion. LOL! Love it!!

    Blessings,
    Marion

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  4. the small poems have so much power, i find.

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  5. definitely. yo, Lizzy!!! love.

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