1.02.2011

dreamy girl

if i could only
be your comfort, your downy
warm when you're lonely,
i would carry us
beyond the place of your pain
to featherbed dreams.
Posted by Marian at 11:54 PM
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 3, 2011 at 12:02 AM

    speaking of downy
    warm featherbed dreams, it's late
    sweet haiku lady.

    and so? we will spar
    again on another day!
    sweetest dreams to you.

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  2. MarianJanuary 3, 2011 at 12:11 AM

    good
    night, my
    sweeteny sweet love.

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  3. About Don MartinJanuary 3, 2011 at 1:45 PM

    the early light comes
    how I love watching you sleep
    from so far away.

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  4. MarianJanuary 3, 2011 at 1:47 PM

    mmm mmm don martin
    who knew you are a poet?
    i could eat your words.

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 3, 2011 at 10:08 PM

    well, you are.

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  6. MarianJanuary 4, 2011 at 11:20 AM

    i know you are but what am i?

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  7. EvelynJanuary 4, 2011 at 1:43 PM

    unforgettable and gorgeous.
    my heart.
    on my mind constantly...
    need I go on?

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  8. MarianJanuary 4, 2011 at 2:39 PM

    oh, you. that was a rhetorical question!

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 5, 2011 at 2:17 PM

    This was very sweet ! liked it :)

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  10. MarianJanuary 5, 2011 at 6:52 PM

    thank you. although, honestly? sweet is not the half of it.

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