1.06.2011

epitaph

life will have been
full of weird
and not so much

in the end
i hope you'll say
"that was strange


but i did 

wilder
things than that."

11 comments:

  1. thank you for providing me with a benchmark, darling!

    to do "wilder things than that!"

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  2. I read this as a bit of advice to our kids as they look back over their parents' lives. enjoy it now, while youre young Lily. ;)

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  3. yes, i like that, southern sir.

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  4. really like this. I love blank tercets, especially used like this, with enjambment over stanza-breaks. Ruffles just a little, enough to make it interesting, but not enough to make it feel disjointed. Like teh sentiment too. Fine little piece, aye.

    Warmest Salad

    Luke @ WordSalad

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  5. aye, thanks, Luke. appreciated.

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  6. wilder things are human things,

    you are you, be cool...

    cute entry,
    Thanks for playing.

    A+

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  7. All the fun things of the past come back to haunt the future. interesting and well written.

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  8. i love this post. thank you! and this is exactly what i want to say in the end. ;)

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  9. are you kidding? in the end, you can say: "i was dishilicious."

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