12.17.2010

musing, also

glance
indulgently
imagine me
imagining you
fits of happy
delirious
dizzy waves
over and over
ah like that
you make me
feel smart.

24 comments:

  1. Very nice. I love the innocence of a crush, and you capture that giddiness quite well.

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  2. Nicely done! It all seems so simple at first, beautifully captured

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  3. "Imagine me, imagining you"

    I love it. Simple but elegant.

    ~ Cheryl

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  4. This made me smile from ear to ear. Nicely done.
    My potluck:
    http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/20/sacrament/

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  5. Loved it, see me smiling and remembering.

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  6. So small and yet huge, like a snowflake you brush away, then you begin to ponder its intricacies and it's like a little universe right there in your hands, falling from the sky.

    This is turning into a poem...

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  7. ah, it's lovely, beautifully written - brings back memories...

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  8. oh how i love Jingle readers!
    and so interesting to see what you have taken from this sparse little number.
    thank you and enjoy!

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  9. you make me feel smart :) i like that.. how quickly we judge our randomness with a runaway sentence but there is true intelligence in them :)

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  10. Leaves me imagining all those dizzy waves. Conjures up many feelings.

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  11. i can tell you are on the right track, dan roberson.
    thanks for seeing.

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  12. 'imagining me, imagining you,' Good one!
    enjoyed it very much!

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  13. eh? this is neat and cute! mine's here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/

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  14. Enjoyed very much...imagine me
    imagining you ...beautiful..
    Here is mine
    http://poem-myworldofexcitement.blogspot.com/2010/12/poem40yes-i-do-write.html

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  15. yay! this is a special little one.
    glad you like it.

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  16. Everybody likes to feel smart. Nice piece.

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  17. thanks. and indeed, even when you damn well know you're smart,
    it's very nice to be reminded.

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  18. ah, this made me smile widely...

    lovely

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  19. glad to be of service! and thanks.

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  20. Love this! I can almost feel the headiness and those fits of happiness!

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