12.21.2010

low moan

        i want to be

trodden
        earthy
               underfoot.

(this poem is partner to this one.)

8 comments:

  1. Is that like the Led Zeppelin tune, "Trampled Under Foot"?

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  2. hmmm. i hesitate to say, not familiar, i don't think.
    so i wasn't stealing it.

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  3. Not blaming you, just noticing the similar.

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  4. this gives me very strange images.... i like.

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  5. to me it read like a list..... maybe im completely wrong.

    i want to be:
    1. trodden
    2. earthy
    3. underfoot

    seems like a very submissive theme. which, is well done.

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  6. no wrong in reading poetry, southern guy.

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