11.03.2010

uncharted

dizzy
you will catch me
delirious and soft
throbby excitement, unbounded
delight.

6 comments:

  1. yes and that is why i love it, too.
    also why i love you.

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  2. The yumminess is all delicious and smacky.

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  3. smacky? i am so stealing that word.
    it pairs well with throbby.

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  4. I love cinquain's the way you love haiku's!

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  5. you love me the way i love you? aw.

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