11.15.2010

cinquain for embracing imperfection

looky
shorts at the gym
where is the brazen girl
who never wore pants? middle aged
awkward
wishing
you'd avert your eyes or see me
in half light, but you, here
in day light, you're
looking.
Posted by Marian at 1:58 PM
Labels: , ,

4 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 15, 2010 at 4:02 PM

    a double!

    delish!

    and all truthy.

    ReplyDelete
  2. MarianNovember 15, 2010 at 4:31 PM

    a mirror, technically.
    and yes, the ugly truth.

    ReplyDelete
  3. NicoleNovember 15, 2010 at 8:54 PM

    hey, dont talk about fan girl like that
    truth is beautiful and so are yer legs

    ReplyDelete
  4. MarianNovember 15, 2010 at 10:21 PM

    ah, well. not so much.
    speaking the truth, though, yes!

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)