11.19.2010

driving home

driving
from the city
from the sunset, toward vast
pearl iridescent seashell sky.
red lights
blinking, river flowing, winding
starts and stops, exhaling
turning left on
my street.

2 comments:

  1. you know what's neat about this structure?

    it's very visually pleasing.

    bonus! beautiful imagery and gorgeous to look at on the page!

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  2. i agree. i love everything about the cinquain. it's beautiful.
    this one is called a butterfly cinquain.
    thank you for digging them!

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