11.18.2010

could be, who knows

something's
coming, like a sondheim lyric
hurrycane sweeping in
delivering
humming
maybe
one-handed catch
something great is coming
if only to keep eyes, mind, heart
open.

6 comments:

  1. Hurrycane?!?
    Dude, I heart you like a fat kid hearts cake.

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  2. hey, i heart cake! a whole heartful.

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  3. New favorite cinquain!

    You two are keeping my reader full to the brim! I love it.

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  4. CDG, as long as you make with the fiction, we have a beautiful agreement going...

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  5. feckin' brilliant...

    can I get a cinquain for Soul Train?

    Da Soooooooooooooooooooouuuuuuul Train...

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  6. hey, another brilliant one heard from!
    Rene! yes, i freaking LOVE Soul Train. you're on.
    all the cool kids are here.
    where in the hell is Nigel?
    xoxox

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