10.17.2010

providence

enter the skinny kid in skinny jeans
puffy silken letter jacket
i laughed out loud

a lens focused to view you

as the afternoon waned and chilled
i began to see you

your eyes
your voice
your laugh
your manner

as i loved you at fourteen

my fierce wish for you

a chaise lounge
a good woman
the warm sea air

your beloved ocean.
Posted by Marian at 9:31 PM
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 17, 2010 at 9:43 PM

    gooseflesh.

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  2. MarianOctober 17, 2010 at 9:49 PM

    me, too. sigh.

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  3. NicoleOctober 17, 2010 at 10:47 PM

    Wow.
    Last five lines!

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  4. MarianOctober 17, 2010 at 11:26 PM

    yes. fierce.

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  5. krisOctober 18, 2010 at 12:26 PM

    New rule.

    All my wishes from this point forward shall be "fierce."

    Swoon.

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  6. MarianOctober 18, 2010 at 12:46 PM

    so shall it be. onward. fiercely.

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  7. Soge shirtsOctober 18, 2010 at 5:48 PM

    My favorite line is:

    as the afternoon waned and chilled
    i began to see you

    I interpreted that as seeing someone one the inside. I could be wrong.

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  8. MarianOctober 18, 2010 at 8:39 PM

    how could you be wrong?
    what you take from my poems is right, and yours.
    kirby kisses to you!

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  9. Eric 'Bubba' AlderJanuary 12, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    What a great wish!

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  10. MarianJanuary 19, 2011 at 11:44 PM

    a wish that i am wishing so much even more fiercely right now, in this moment, wishing wishing wishing!
    WISH FINGERS CROSSED WISH WISH WISH!

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