you drove away
with your bureau and that cat
i do not like all cats.
some entrance
hitting town
station wagon heavy
the weight of your possessions
and your choices
why did you take all the rice?
9.12.2010
the weight
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I like it. It seems like a breakup poem. Is it?
ReplyDeleteyou decide.
ReplyDeleteI do not like ANY cats, or dogs, undecided about living things in general... But RICE? I adore. That bastard.
ReplyDeleteI like that.
ReplyDeleteQuite much.
i like cats. but not that cat.
ReplyDeleteno dogs.
rice? adorable, yes. a necessity.
and i like nigel.
Ooooh . . . I do like this poetry of yours that does not ask my brain to seek out the numbered syllables.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous.
And the empty spaces you have left for me to fill?
Love those.
Thank you.
my pleasure.
ReplyDeleteI have decided. And I totally get the cat thing. Some pets, like some children, are not always so friendly. Maybe that sounds mean...
ReplyDeleteagreed!
ReplyDelete"i do not like all cats."
ReplyDeleteHA! I love it when one lil word changes a sentence like that.
i am a cat person.
ReplyDeleteme too.
ReplyDeletedogs smell.
among other things.
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