9.16.2010

unstoppable love haiku

at last our embrace
crazy beautiful succeeds
red stubborn aching

window flung open
unleashing nascent desire
to bring me to you

in the mist, hair wet
across drowning eyes, kiss me
harder, yes right there

unstoppable love
unafraid, unrepentant
finally arrived

7 comments:

  1. That's quite delish.

    Plus bonus points for "nascent."

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  2. oh, Marian!

    I second Nigel. Nascent? Mmm.

    Vocab is sexy.

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  3. ah, thank you, my friends.
    i also like "unrepentant."

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  4. Personally?

    I am in love with "drowning eyes."

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  5. A tour de force of lusty lovin' haiku! Great!

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  6. aw. lotsa lusty lovin' up in here.

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