8.16.2010

valley girl

Clearly, I have a problem. Please, someone stop me. More ridiculous haiku, about... well, you know.

nick cage, i loved you
when you said "that chick julie,
she's truly dazzling"

your punk rock party
i wanted to visit, my
safety pins in ears

and that shopping mall,
like tom petty's free falling
inviting beauty

i'd ride a skateboard
i would have gone with you, but
you loved your julie

a nice girl, julie
totally tubular, but
her friend was hotter

e. g. daily, of
the lovely tits, turns out voiced
babe in the sequel

aloof in high school
your bravado: i would have
fucked you and your friend

oh, nick cage, would there
be someone to think i was
dazzling? i hoped so.

22 comments:

  1. Valley girl? Haiku
    Crazed writer girl more like it.
    What's next? Haiku-speak?

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  2. Haiku's good on you
    unusual for homeschool
    you go, pin up ears

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  3. Just so you know it,
    I too am homeschool poet.
    You represent well.

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  4. this totally rocked my little good girl from the suburbs world.

    Unrelated but I think you will like this crafty little link...
    http://www.spritestitch.com/

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  5. We had better watch out.

    This could get to be a habit.

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  6. waking up: wet bed
    (not mine) and haiku love. ah.
    beautiful morning.

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  7. upon reflection, i realize that in my mind's eye, nick cage's friend in that movie is a young quentin tarantino. i'm 98% sure that is not correct, but i'm not gonna check (and please don't tell me) because i am enjoying my own version.

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  8. You have set me off with this batch.

    Come look.

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  9. Who's the more foolish: the fool, or the fool who follows him? I must plan my next move.

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  10. Marian,
    I like your haiku
    sometimes I haiku like you
    Mainly when I drink

    Hey! love your blog - thanks for all of your advice on mine - on the format, etc.
    Cate

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  11. thank you, Cate! and you're welcome. just observations, not advice! :)

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  12. nick cage is awesome
    valley girl like a primer
    but YOU rock my world.

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  13. ah! i am feeling all sultry and powerful.

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  14. that's what i'm going for: the honor roll.

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  15. lol. funny one lol I like
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/my-poetic-man/

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  16. thanks! i like it, too.
    funny, but also real.
    checking you out!

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  17. the number of times i've made a reference to this movie only to be met with a blank stare...

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