nick cage, i loved youwhen you said "that chick julie,
she's truly dazzling"
your punk rock party
i wanted to visit, my
safety pins in ears
and that shopping mall,
like tom petty's free falling
inviting beauty
i'd ride a skateboard
i would have gone with you, but
you loved your julie
a nice girl, julie
totally tubular, but
her friend was hotter
e. g. daily, of
the lovely tits, turns out voiced
babe in the sequel
aloof in high school
your bravado: i would have
fucked you and your friend
oh, nick cage, would there
be someone to think i was
dazzling? i hoped so.
8.16.2010
valley girl
Clearly, I have a problem. Please, someone stop me. More ridiculous haiku, about... well, you know.
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Valley girl? Haiku
ReplyDeleteCrazed writer girl more like it.
What's next? Haiku-speak?
Haiku's good on you
ReplyDeleteunusual for homeschool
you go, pin up ears
Just so you know it,
ReplyDeleteI too am homeschool poet.
You represent well.
this totally rocked my little good girl from the suburbs world.
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http://www.spritestitch.com/
We had better watch out.
ReplyDeleteThis could get to be a habit.
waking up: wet bed
ReplyDelete(not mine) and haiku love. ah.
beautiful morning.
upon reflection, i realize that in my mind's eye, nick cage's friend in that movie is a young quentin tarantino. i'm 98% sure that is not correct, but i'm not gonna check (and please don't tell me) because i am enjoying my own version.
ReplyDeleteYou have set me off with this batch.
ReplyDeleteCome look.
Who's the more foolish: the fool, or the fool who follows him? I must plan my next move.
ReplyDeleteMarian,
ReplyDeleteI like your haiku
sometimes I haiku like you
Mainly when I drink
Hey! love your blog - thanks for all of your advice on mine - on the format, etc.
Cate
thank you, Cate! and you're welcome. just observations, not advice! :)
ReplyDeleteoh, Nick Cage.
ReplyDeleteNow I want to go watch it.
nick cage is awesome
ReplyDeletevalley girl like a primer
but YOU rock my world.
oooh! shivers...
ReplyDeleteah! i am feeling all sultry and powerful.
ReplyDeletelovely entry.
ReplyDeleteA+
that's what i'm going for: the honor roll.
ReplyDeletelol. funny one lol I like
ReplyDeletehttp://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/my-poetic-man/
thanks! i like it, too.
ReplyDeletefunny, but also real.
checking you out!
seriously, a classic!
ReplyDeletethe number of times i've made a reference to this movie only to be met with a blank stare...
ReplyDeleteian! truly dazzling.
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