6.29.2010

thanks, penn jillette

she was the first breasts i noticed
and i couldn't look--
awkward, flushed wordlessness,
kicking rocks,
obvious but ambivalent.
did she notice? i caught her looking.
ride away to what is known,
but I did notice.

2 comments:

  1. Love it! I am noticing the changes in my niece and her friend and the way that they look at each other. oh my, such a time!

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  2. interesting, i was thinking about something very different when i wrote this. subject to interpretation!

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